A more perfect speech-obama

In my opinion I beleive Obama made the changes to his speech because he wanted his speech to be on a more personal level with the country and people he was speaking to. His additions to the speech consisted of changing the sentences around by adding the word "us" or "we". This in return would look like to most people that he is on the same level as the majority of americans. Talking to them on a more personal level allows the people to be more trusting towards him and it often gives the audience a better understanding of what is being said. It always seems like he was altering his speech to provide america with the knowledge that he wants to "help" the country, talking about seniors who need help, etc. He wanted to let America know that he was here to help each person. That is what he wanted it to seem like. Making it personal. I beleive the additions and corrections he made to his speech provided a lot for it.