Obamas changes (BG)

I think Obama made these changes because it sounded better and flowed better with what was being said. I think that Obama makes things sound more professional. In the revisoins he talks about the health care not only for the kids but the elderly as well. I know for kids important for them to stay healthy but at the same time, the elderly have so many medications to be on, and some go to the lengths of cutting pills, to make them last longer. I think that Obama went back and did these revisions, because in his job, everything you say counts. you got to be careful of what you say and how you say it. this artical was kind of hard for me to follow but i did get some things out of it. such as the medical care and how we are all in this together, and how he wants to help families. i think that he made the revisions so he can be confident in what he says and is sure its easy to follow for the listeners. i personally never thought he would have to make that many revisions, but in the end, if it gets his message across, then i guess its all worth it in the end.