Why Obama made specific changes ?

I believe obama made those specific changes for many reasons. One would be to reach out more to the audiance of poloticians and to grap their attention more. If he didn't keep his audiance interested and focused on the subject he was talking about he would not have been taken very seriously when he was running for office. Obama made those changes to sound more polotical and more percise in what he was taking about, trying to be more specific in what he was saying about healthcare and financial benefits , insurance that sort of concept. If you were the president of the united states and you had to give a speech just like obama did would you have taken the time to make sure that everey word was percise. Yeah , because you wouldn't want to be booed right of stage and someone telling you that you are not doing your job and how you should do this or do that, just someone trying to tell you what you should have done. We all have to understand that giving a speech is very hard, especially writing one which we have all done in some point in our lives. We just have to make sure every puncuation point is in its place and to make sure everything is neat and well written because you never know when some one will be listening to what you say and to judge how you feel. You always need to sound confident in yourself and be pround in what you are saying so that you can grab your audiances attention very well and will sound very proffesional .