Obama

I think that Obama made the changes to his speech to make it more effective. To have an effective speech especially in politics, everything has to be perfect since so many people are listening to it. Some of his changes were made to make it more easily to understand or to make a point proven. When he was going through it he obviously thought of better things to say, so that is why the changes took place. Whenever a writer goes through something they write there are always changes to be made to make it sound better. Therefore, after he went through his first copy he corrected his mistakes to make him sound better while reading the speech. He could of just made the changes to make people for him on his speech and so that it was liked by the people. There could be many reasons for the changes but no one will really know but him, but we can make guesses as to why the changes were made.