OBAMA

Looking at his revised paper it is very over whelming. He has to bascialy make a perfect speech seeing he is the president of the United States. I never really thought about the revision processes for him it must be very stresseful and he prolly has people check it over and over again so he doesnt look like a fool. this article was hard for me to understand but what i did get some things out of it. In his paper i liked how he said we are all in this together i feel that is ture and he wants to help familes with sick childern and for the health care bill. It also talked about the health care for the elderly. I know for the elderly it must be tough because a lot of them need medication and there social secerity which they worked hard for. I think he made his revisions because when you are a polition everything you say matters. he also had to make things sound perfesiniol and so that people could follow what he was saying and take in and understand all of it. in the beging at first he said him but then changed it and adressed teddy which was more profesinial, also in many cases i saw that he changed the way he worded things. i never really though about all the corrections he has to make.